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Wednesday, June 20, 2018

Matariki Haiku.

Matariki
Waiti
Glimmering bright spark
Star of the lakes and rivers
Drained out to Waitā


Waitā
Salty rocks ashore
Seventy percent of earth
But a mile away
Waipuna-ā-rangi
Draining poor Waitā
Great star of rain and down fall.
Feeding bright Waiti

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  1. AnonymousJuly 4, 2018 at 2:18 PM

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    1. AnonymousJuly 4, 2018 at 2:38 PM

      Thanks Lyriq! That was very fun coming up with these haikus!!

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  2. AnonymousJuly 4, 2018 at 2:24 PM

    You have used adjectives, its effective because it makes the writing more interesting and powerful.

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