This is my slow writing of athletics day.
High Jump
The Bar was as solid as a slab of concrete.
My clumsy body slammed into the stripy pole.
My stomach screamed when I squashed the big black bar.
Could I have jumped that high? I doubted it!!
Again I jumped as high as I could, but gravity got the better of me.
Whamm!!!
By Louis
I found the 4th line the best.
I found the alliteration the hard part.
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